Many people think that single gender schools can provide more opportunities and create more convenient environment than co-educational schools. In my opinion, while I believe that single sex education has some advantages over mixed education,I also think that mixed education has significant advantages as well.
It is undeniably true that when children grow up, they develop teenage hormones , which leads to them early relationships and most of the parents do not want this. In fact, there is no chance of having this problem in single-sex school. Girls often feel uncomfortable or intimidated while they sit next to boys for learning which creates a hindrance for learning.As girls learn faster than boys,so it is better to teach boys as well as girls separately.Moreover, single gender schools have to face less issues about discipline.In other words,there is a chance of conflict between the two genders in co-educational schools whereas single sex schools are out of this issue.Furthermore,this kind of education can focus on particular gender which results in better result.
Similarly,in a co-education system as boys and girls work together for different projects,it helps them to understand each other as well and which is essential for real world activities,for instance,nowadays every single job need team working.Certainly, single sex school has lack of providing such opportunity.Boys and girls view thing differently.In other words,they have different perspectives which helps to understand topics in various ways as well as to build a good understanding between them.
In conclusion,I am convinced that both single sex schools and mixed schools have certain advantages that can be beneficial for students according aforementioned reasons.
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Many people think that single gender schools can provide more opportunities and create more convenient environment than co-educational schools. In my opinion, I think that mixed sex schools are more effective than single sex schools to enhance the potentiality of the children.
Regarding to a co-education system, boys and girls work together for different projects,which helps them to understand each other as well as essential for real world activities,for instance,nowadays every single job need team working.SO,Certainly, single sex school has lack of providing such opportunity.Boys and girls view things differently, which means they have different perspectives which increase the ability to understand topics in various ways.It creates a competitive environment as girls and boys are in the same class and motivates them for getting succeed against each other.
Similarly, as co education mirrors the real world,it’s a great learning place to learn how to deal with issues that will come in future. They learn how to combine each other ideas to tackle problems and how to deal with the activites they will have to do in future from here. For example, I studied in a co-educational school which helps me to cooperate with females in a easy way where most of my friends feels shy and for this reason they cannot do things properly even in university life. In addition to they sometimes ask me how can you do you job nicely.Then I usually say it’s the result of studying in a co-educational school.
In conclusion,I am strongly convinced that without any doubt mixed schools can make students skillful, comprehensive as well as effective and moreover these schools are far better than single sex schools.
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Mixed Schools versus Separate Schools
by ABHISHEK SINHA
Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Certain group of society feels that it is beneficial for boys and girls to be educated in separate institutions, whereas it has an opponent view who trust and support both the sex studying under one roof. This is also called Co education. I think going to a mixed education school has a lots of benefit such as gaining confidence and not being shy, cost effectiveness, respect for women as well as being more responsible citizen.
It has been observed that children who study at mixed gender school are more open and gains confidence as a natural phenomenon of being appreciated by opposite sex. Boys as being close to girls and vice versa gives a good opportunity to understand each other. This later on turns into respecting each other rather than being bias. Being attracted to opposite gender helps them to take ownership and eventually are being a bonhomie and responsible person. Single roof education reduces the cost of education as two different infrastructure is not required. My cousin is one of the best example. He was very shy when he was in boys school, however, after being admitted to a coeducational he in the virtue of showing himself special, he improved dramatically and today he is a confident and bonhomie person.
Having said that, people will advocate in support of separate schools for genders for risk of being engaged and committing unfair activities. There has been several instances where boys or girls getting attracted to each other and impacted there studies. Others went into illegal relationship at very early age. This is true do we have any assurance that such acts will not happen if they study at separate school. The answer is no.
In conclusion, despite of some drawbacks and risk what a coeducation may have, can not defeat several advantages. Therefore in my opinion, I agree to the thought that coeducation is more beneficial for boys and girls.
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